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16-10-2011, 23:27

A deluded truth

You became the snow that melts,
When the sun begins to glare,
A star who's faded into the night,
And whose light's no longer there.

The words erased from a notebook page,
Leaving only impressions behind,
So too did you disappear from sight,
With nothing but memories to remind.

Like a drop of water into the ocean,
You were swallowed by uncertainty,
Lost among the grains of sand,
That make up what we call eternity.

Everything that was once you,
Brushed away like teardrops from a face,
Gone with no one but me to mourn,
The vanishing of your every trace.

Now the task falls unto me,
To sing once more your last lament,
For no one else will ever understand,
The full extent of how much you truly meant.


16-10-2011, 23:43


Heel mooi geschreven.

16-10-2011, 23:45
'From a distance, everything looks beautiful'

16-10-2011, 23:47

Citaat door DeAdmiraal:
'From a distance, everything looks beautiful'
How should it look like from a distance?

16-10-2011, 23:54



Citaat door DeAdmiraal:

A deluded truth

You became the snow that melts,
When the sun begins to glare,
A star who's faded into the night,
And whose light's no longer there.

The words erased from a notebook page,
Leaving only impressions behind,
So too did you disappear from sight,
With nothing but memories to remind.

Like a drop of water into the ocean,
You were swallowed by uncertainty,
Lost among the grains of sand,
That make up what we call eternity.

Everything that was once you,
Brushed away like teardrops from a face,
Gone with no one but me to mourn,
The vanishing of your every trace.

Now the task falls unto me,
To sing once more your last lament,
For no one else will ever understand,
The full extent of how much you truly meant.

Iemand maakt zich zorgen.

Mooi geschreven.

18-10-2011, 00:14
'There is no such thing as darkness, darkness is simply defined as the absence of light and yet I still doubt it'

18-10-2011, 00:21
Very, very very lovely!!

18-10-2011, 00:27

Citaat door DeAdmiraal:
'There is no such thing as darkness, darkness is simply defined as the absence of light and yet I still doubt it'
Dat is best wel optimistisch .

18-10-2011, 00:30
Wow.. Pijnlijk..

18-10-2011, 00:42

Citaat door TIYW:
Dat is best wel optimistisch .
jij begrijpt het duidelijk niet.

@TS! Nice bro! But remember we are people of the sea, every night our North Star is shining bright and proud.

18-10-2011, 00:46

Citaat door De_Admiraal:
jij begrijpt het duidelijk niet.

@TS! Nice bro! But remember we are people of the sea, every night our North Star is shining bright and proud.
Mwuaah.. hangt ervan af wat je wilt zien. Als je duister ziet als een gebrek aan licht, dan vind ik dat best positief. Vooral als je gelooft dat er niet iets is als duisternis. Betekent dat je naar t licht moet zoeken, hoe moeilijk dat is daargelaten dan. Alleen het twijfelgedeelte is wat minder positief, maar daarom schreef ik ook dat t best optimistisch is. Ach, ieder zijn eigen kijk erop.

18-10-2011, 00:47
DeAdmiraal & De_Admiraal you both are ok! Maar wil de echte Admiraal nu opstaan

18-10-2011, 00:51



Citaat door Kleine-Ster:
DeAdmiraal & De_Admiraal you both are ok! Maar wil de echte Admiraal nu opstaan
Will the real slim shady please stand up

Elk maritieme grootmacht kent een Admiraal. So I guess we are all as real as real can get. Er loopt nog een Admiraal op m.nl

DeAdmiraal, De_Admiraal, Admiraal, Brothers of the sea.

18-10-2011, 00:54
Mooi hoor.

Zelf geschreven?

18-10-2011, 00:56

Citaat door __Esmaatje__:
Mooi hoor.

Zelf geschreven?
Maakt dat het mooier of minder mooi?

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