Bekijk volle/desktop versie : Liefde Ik dicht met woorden



08-02-2009, 16:30
Ik dicht, zwicht
Met woorden, ongehoord.
Hoor je, bekorend
Mijn woorden, aanhorend

Ik dicht, gericht
Met gevoelens, doelend
Voel je, voelend
Mijn emoties, berispend.

A/N: Doesn't this make sense?
Neem de eerste twee woorden van elke zin, en zie daar, wat ik bedoel..

08-02-2009, 16:43


it does!

maar dat moet je niet verklappen
tijdens het lezen moet de lezer het zelf snappen

dat is dus het leuke aan gedichten
de boodschap die de schrijvers naar buiten richten

stijlvol en bekwaam
triest of vrolijk serieus kijkt men naar het 'raam'

08-02-2009, 21:31
Hehe, thanks for your response!

08-02-2009, 21:37
there are days when im feeling down
there are days when when youre not around
days that I miss the little things in life that use to make me feel good
days that I dont know what to do with this feeling that I feel understood
days that I need youre arms around me to hold me tight
days that someone tells me that everything is gonna be alright..

you were always there for me when I need a shoulder to cry on
but now words are all sad en done..

can you imagine you and me forever
we had good and bad days but stay always together
do you remember the prommisses that you made
that you will always be there for me I never have to wait..

do you remember the memories that we could laugh and cry
do you remember the tears I've cryed the day you sad goodbey..

this emptyness deep within my soul
makes me feel not human but nothing less then a doll
cause my heart is ript in pieces cant explain how I feel
I dont wanna exept the loneliness but I know its real..

I wonder what you doing now wonder if you care
wonder if you still love me wonder if you stop and stair..
wonder if feeling are changed, maybe you fell in love again
wonder if you miss me wonder if you think about me now and then..

cause I do every minute every second every day
knowing that My love for you cant stop it always stay
Maybe its strange but Ill keep thinking and compearing other people with you
if someone would leave me now, I coudnt cry, there wont be any tears or any pain
cause you left me already my hart already walked away
away since the day that you'd dissapear
Oh what does my heart wish that you would be still here....

08-02-2009, 21:38



Citaat door AHfilterkoffie:
Ik dicht, zwicht
Met woorden, ongehoord.
Hoor je, bekorend
Mijn woorden, aanhorend

Ik dicht, gericht
Met gevoelens, doelend
Voel je, voelend
Mijn emoties, berispend.

A/N: Doesn't this make sense?
Neem de eerste twee woorden van elke zin, en zie daar, wat ik bedoel..


jij bent zeker slim

08-02-2009, 22:42
Hehe, valt wel mee.
Anders zou ik nu aan mijn huiswerk zitten.