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05-04-2007, 20:06
Hi all

It's first time I write down here , so I hope u accept me here

this is my poet:


Life gives , life takes
Don't live in fake
You gotta be awake
from folkes & snakes
watch out each step you'll make
cause we live in Ocean not in lake
look round u, nothing lives til sake
xxx
today u lough, tomorow u'll cry
today u say hi, tomororw u'll say bye
death comes in blink of an eye
body lays in grave, soul flies in sky
that's the way life goes,that's no lie
wonder til when we gonna fight on pie
why don't we share it, we gotta just try

05-04-2007, 22:13


i think its nice

05-04-2007, 22:26
Mooi, zelf geschreven?

09-04-2007, 18:25

Citaat door elhobgataar:
Mooi, zelf geschreven?




danke,natuurlijk